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Before & After #1

Patricia's Writing Upgrade

Clearer business English

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Before & After #1: Patricia and Draft compare a formal report email with a shorter version. The original DeskDraft watermark is visible.
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The lesson

Clearer words. Same message.

Before

Please be informed that I have attached the revised report.

After

I've attached the revised report.

The shorter sentence gives the reader the same information with fewer words. Choose the version that fits your situation and audience.