Which Sentence Is Clearer? #1
Patricia's Clarity Challenge
Choose the clearer sentence
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Your turn
Which sentence is clearer?
- A. A review of the proposal was conducted by the team.
- B. The team reviewed the proposal.
Choose A or B, then reveal the answer.
Answer: B. The team reviewed the proposal.
“The team reviewed the proposal” directly identifies the person or group performing the action. Both versions are grammatical, but B is shorter and more direct in this context.